Tuesday, 24 November 2015

Rough cut


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Improvements 

- at 0:10, the shot with the title 'Renegades' should be longer because otherwise the audience is unable to read it.
- The lip syncing shots at the start are a bit samey so i'm going to go back and switch some of the shots out for different angles. 
-The pace at the start is almost too quick some of the shots could be a bit longer

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